【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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2 Q! X4 u0 [8 V! E  m我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
1 Q# h) ]; L$ x+ AThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
4 r9 c+ _  V" d- [) i1 q1 `) ^2 VFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
1 b" a0 h" e* f: O. FI would probably know how you feel
. ^& K$ A/ X) D% o3 ~Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. d: q) }3 o3 |" Y+ qBut I never did
2 Q. K8 z/ _% r" K$ m+ l( COne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 K9 A3 y8 k$ S  {If today isn’t too late,
  D6 X; \8 j0 v/ |: b' G  h/ \I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 X- E- p% \9 k2 k8 \I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
0 [: W; q/ ?6 g4 R& v5 z2 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
$ S3 U9 h1 _' ?/ zEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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+ b* w3 l0 V( M6 }6 {- _5 I2 u[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" d2 L. N' N6 D  U" w6 ~" d<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, G8 ^2 ]8 x0 P/ Z<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
, q. Q1 P# b/ F1 E<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% {" R9 l  Q3 V& T<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, R0 F, H! G) e, n3 P7 z% n<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ g2 W8 R1 ^- Y6 H<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% g: ]: w/ x9 n, j, B<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 h/ N" a8 N; r! @7 u<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ @; o3 w. u  |8 k0 l5 J! h<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
1 \! e" {2 B$ `0 i0 _<P>但我不会</P>
, i: ?2 k  Z5 P9 k3 U3 x<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
5 v9 |; E! O/ ^. j- Z<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
: ]+ V* R5 b: P<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
/ h& }. r  w8 r0 R: a<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
; r  T7 [" N2 I$ S2 r<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
, V/ w. z: n: b! N4 o- V! J<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% {8 a! ^4 n- v! [<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
. }4 i9 O" ~$ @0 U% @8 J% s<P>但我不会 </P>
/ a6 ]* e2 Z3 Y/ @/ @0 W. t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ z5 ?, p" z3 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
( E. E! N+ X, H% [3 ]& f  K& B<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  f8 P7 d: n6 `& }<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ |8 f# T1 D$ K& C( [. P<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 s$ ?' B. f" c<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 R7 F9 c7 n  L2 |7 f) t% P<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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5 i, a2 R8 ~8 M* ^+ S( P* C6 W6 g 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

# W( O7 _" n' A4 U9 `" @这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% q3 y6 Y' j8 q. P<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 _$ H5 ~" A1 K- l<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>